All notes are in characters names and ideas for my story.
- Hard for all the people to get to (City)
- Tried to trick Sara that they had killed Rory?
- Really really big fight
- Rex and his people had weird/new weapons, being tricky
- A lot of Rory's people were hurt, fight stopped for a little bit
- A doctor, Greg, came to heal them?
- Fighting continued
- Rex had a really big dude that was crazy strong and only wanted blood, hurt Heath and took Seth
- Rory shot the big dude in the head
- Rory sent sign of defeat (white flag)
- Larry kills Rex's son, Ian
- Rex almost killed Larry, every one thought he was dead but he awoke and had only a small wound
- The battle didn't stop for a long while and different sorts of people from around (City) helped him to defeat Rex.
- Rory got in a car and sped through the town right towards Rex and at the last second before Rex could jump away, Rory pulled out a revolver out of the car window and shot him once in the head.
- He died right there.
- Everyone rejoiced because of how horrible Rex was. They all welcomed and applauded Rory
- Rex's "wife" sobbed for his passing
- (Rama sent Hanuman to tell Sita to bathe and get new clothes before coming to see her?? (Kind of RUDE) like hello, I've been waiting for you to save me and you want me to shower first before I get to see you?
- (WHAT. Rama doesn't want Sita now because she's been held in another person's house?????)
- (He thinks she is impure now? So she plans on killing herself because she cannot live without him)
- Someone from Rex's group could tell Rory that she fought against him the whole time and never once did anything unhonorably, she stayed true to him the whole time
- So he took her back (still think its RUDE)
- They returned to Chicago to his home, he found out his father and died but his other brother, Bill waited to see if they would ever return, he gave Rory the deed to the house (after 14 months maybe? 14 years would seem really excessive in modern day)
- People looked at Sara in a bad way because they thought she had been unclean (find another way to say this in modern language without being gross) so Rory sent her away and she ended up staying with a man that found Sara when she was just born in a basket outside (parents abandoned her, this guy was basically her dad but not really) and had 2 sons (Rory's)
- 16 years (might change that) Rory ran into his sons but did not know who they were but they looked a lot like him so asked who their parents were and they say Sara but idk dad
- (Sita ends up coming back but got taken abode the nagas because of her purity, weird, so she's in heaven?)
- Might end my story with her dying or her basically saying screw you to Rory
- (Rama died 1000 years later)
- Might have him living till he was old and forever thought of Sara?
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